第7期|段建军:汽车的发明者 将从客户出发

夜雨中的诗意是翻飞的也是漫漶的，期段汽车她恰如一个善解人意的红粉知己，无言却恰到好处地渲染你淡若夜风的情绪。

建军如：Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife.Therearethreereasonsforthis.这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。2.表示好处1)Ithasthefollowingadvantages.2)Itdoesusalotofgood.3)Itbenefitsusquitealot.4)Itisbeneficialtous.5)Itisofgreatbenefittous.例如：客户Booksarelikefriends.Theycanhelpusknowtheworldbetter，客户andtheycanopenourmindsandwidenourhorizons.Therefore，readingextensivelyisofgreatbenefittous.3.表示坏处1)Ithasmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages.2)Itdoesusmuchharm.3)Itisharmfultous.例如：However，everythingdividesintotwo.Televisioncanalsobeharmfultous.Itcandoharmtoourhealthandmakeuslazyifwespendtoomuchtimewatchingtelevision.4.表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能1)Itisimportant(necessary，difficult，convenient，possible)forsb.todosth.2)Wethinkitnecessarytodosth.3)Itplaysanimportantroleinourlife.例如：Computersarenowbeingusedeverywhere，whetherinthegovernment，inschoolsorinbusiness.Soon，computerswillbefoundineveryhome，too.WehavegoodreasontosaythatcomputersareplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourlifeandwehavesteppedintotheComputerAge.5.表示措施1)Weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures.2)Weshouldtryourbesttoovercome(conquer)thedifficulties.3)Weshoulddoourutmostindoingsth.4)Weshouldsolvetheproblemsthatweareconfronted(faced)with.例如：Thehousingproblemthatweareconfrontedwithisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.Therefore，wemusttakesomeeffectivemeasurestosolveit.6.表示变化1)Somechangeshavetakenplaceinthepastfiveyears.2)Agreatchangewillcertainlybeproducedintheworldscommunications.3)Thecomputerhasbroughtaboutmanychangesineducation.例如：Somechangeshavetakenplaceinpeoplesdietinthepastfiveyears.Themajorreasonsforthesechangesarenotfartoseek.Nowadays，moreandmorepeopleareswitchingfromgraintomeatforprotein，andfromfruitandvegetabletomilkforvitamins.7.表示事实、现状1)Wecannotignorethefactthat...2)Noonecandenythefactthat...3)Thereisnodenyingthefactthat...4)Thisisaphenomenonthatmanypeopleareinterestedin.5)However，thatsnotthecase.例如：Wecannotignorethefactthatindustrializationbringswithittheproblemsofpollution.Tosolvetheseproblems，wecanstartbyeducatingthepublicaboutthehazardsofpollution.Thegovernmentonitspartshouldalsodesignstricterlawstopromoteacleanerenvironment.8.表示比较1)ComparedwithA，B...2)IprefertoreadratherthanwatchTV.3)Thereisastrikingcontrastbetweenthem.例如：Comparedwithcars，bicycleshaveseveraladvantagesbesidesbeingaffordable.Firstly，theydonotconsumenaturalresourcesofpetroleum.Secondly，theydonotcausethepollutionproblem.Lastbutnotleast，theycontributetopeopleshealthbygivingthemduephysicalexercise.9.表示数量1)Ithasincreased(decreased)from...to...2)Thepopulationinthiscityhasnowincreased(decreased)to800，000.3)TheoutputofJulyinthisfactoryincreasedby15%comparedwiththatofJanuary.例如：Withtheimprovementofthelivingstandard，theproportionofpeoplesincomespentonfoodhasdecreasedwhilethatspentoneducationhasincreased.再如：Fromthegraphlistedabove，itcanbeseenthatstudentuseofcomputershasincreasedfromanaverageoflessthantwohoursperweekin1990to20hoursin2000。

今天，期段汽车针对在英语写作中经常用到的十二个句意给大家总结了每个句意不同的表达方式，期段汽车一起来看一下吧!1.表示原因1)Therearethreereasonsforthis.2)Thereasonsforthisareasfollows.3)Thereasonforthisisobvious.4)Thereasonforthisisnotfartoseek.5)Thereasonforthisisthat...6)Wehavegoodreasontobelievethat...例如：Therearethreereasonsforthechangesthathavetakenplaceinourlife.Firstly，peopleslivingstandardhasbeengreatlyimproved.Secondly，mostpeoplearewellpaid，andtheycanaffordwhattheyneedorlike.Lastbutnotleast，moreandmorepeopleprefertoenjoymodernlife.注：如果写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子尽量以客观陈述为主，建军少主观臆测推断;尽量明确无误表达，少模棱两可评论，这是使文章清晰确切的写作准则。写作的目的是向读者传递信息、客户介绍情况，或阐述作者对某一主题所持的观点，用英文写作也不例外。

文章的这种逻辑性可以通过采用从一般到具体、期段汽车从全景到细节、从问题的定义到分析再到提出解决方案等多种方式来体现。定律之二：建军准确要使文章语义表达准确，建军首先要尽量不要在学术文章中出现大概、也许之类模棱两可的词语，避免出现容易让人困惑和误解的词语和表达法;其次，要尽量避免使用那些有多种含义的词语和表达法。

也就是说，客户写作必须要以特定读者为对象，以让读者能够明确接受作者所传递的信息为宗旨。

例如：期段汽车Singaporeisafinecountry.这句话中的fine一词有多种含义，如好的、细小的、罚款等。下面这篇学生作文是较为典型的一篇英语议论文：建军ShouldExaminationBeAbolished（取消）？Theexaminationsystemhascometobethemaintheme（主题）ofmoderneducation.Oneshouldtakeanexaminationandsucceedinpassingitbeforehecouldbeadmitted，建军promotedorgraduated.Asitplayssoimportantaroleintherealmofeducation（教育的领域）itisundermuchcriticism（评论）astoitsvalidity（有效性）.Peoplewhoareinfavourofittrytodevelopthissystemmore。

在具体写作中要注意下列几点：客户1.议题的提出要开门见山，客户不要拖泥带水，啰啰唆唆2.正反两方面的观点一般都要摆出，有时也有只强调一种观点的，那么这就等于将上述第二点和第三点合在一起了3.作者的观点必须鲜明，不能模棱两可4.论证自己的观点是议论文的最关键的部分。thosewhoareagainstitbelievethatsuchasystemshouldbeabolished.Shouldexaminationbeabolished？Inmyopinionitshouldbe.Manypeoplethinkthatanexaminationistheonlymeanstotestknowledge，期段汽车but，期段汽车infact，thatisnottrue.Afewquestionsgiveninanexaminationcouldbynomeanscoverthewholefieldofthesubject.Thusthosewhoareabletoanswerthemmaybethepoorestofthestudentsandyethappentoknowjustafewpointsaboutthatsubject.I'dliketosaythat，becauseoftheexistenceoftheexaminationsystem，studentspaysomuchattentiontogaininghighmarks，thattheyoftenforgetthechiefpurposeofeducation.Theso-calledcleverstudentsdevote（贡献）themselvestothestudyoftextbooksonly.They，ofcourse，knownothingbuttheskeleton（梗概）ofknowledge.Theendandaimofeducation，however，istoenablestudentstolearnhowtolive.Todothis，studentsmustgetthemselvestodoallkindsoftraining，physicalaswellasmental.Thepresentexaminationsystemhasdiscouragedstudentsfrommakingsuchanattempt.Moreover，sincethestudentstrysohardtoputtheirlessonsintomemoryinasshortatimeaspossible，psychologically（心理上来看），theysoonforgetthewholesubjectassoonastheexaminationisover.Surelythisisoneofthegreatestwastesevermadeinthehistoryofcivilization.Lastly，inordertogethighmarks，thereisagreattemptation（诱惑）forstudentstocheat（作弊）inanexamination.Indeed，suchapracticebecomesthemeanstotheend.Theycheattheirteachers，theirparentsandalsothemselves.Suchatendencywouldimpair（损害）ourmoralstandards（道德标准）.Therefore，Iamoftheopinion，inconclusion，thattheexaminationsystemshouldbeabolished.

短文缩写可以是就所学课文进行缩写，建军也可以采用其它阅读材料，但要求被缩写的材料难易程度不超过所学课本。在训练初期，客户引导写作的命题应尽量与所学英语书本的内容挂钩，使学生能够参照一部分课文所学的词汇与结构，避免大多生词。

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